Thursday, January 6, 2011

Free Write

So I believe that I have many weaknesses rther then strenghs. I think that I have good thoughts and when I try to put them on paper it doesnt come out how I want it and it makes me seem like im dumb. I dont like how you tell me what to do but dont actually show me on my paper what to do. I feel like I need to work on my argument and my intro ad conclusion a whole lot better. I understand what im doing but you dont reallt tell me how to fix it. I just need help overall. I think its hard trying to write in third person and after I do then it doesnt make sense. I just hate writing essays overall.(:

xoxo
Breanna Lozoya<3

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